Thursday, April 26, 2018

final deadlines for Spring 2018 - Adv. Comp.

Yikes! ... Like yikes, yikes ... we only have 13 school days left in 2017 - 2018!

Here's what we will do:

  • The "turnitin mark-up quizzes will be Tue., May 1, Thurs., May 3, & Tue. May 8.
  • I'm going to waive the Portfolio on the summative level (I'll explain in class.)
  • The final, final thesis for the AoF will be due on Mon., April 30.
  • The final outline for the AoF will be due on Fri., May 4.
  • The introduction to the AoF (1-2 para.) will be due on Mon., May 7.
  • I will check "progress on the body" of the AoF April 8 - 10.
  • You will submit/upload your annotated bibliography in class on Thur., May 10. (Like the AoF, I will not/cannot take this late.)
  • The AoF will be due at 11:59 PM on Friday, May 11. I will not (actually cannot) accept a late paper for this assignment.
  • I'm amending the final to allow for choice between (1) finishing/polishing a portfolio OR (2) giving a presentation. (I'll explain in class.)

Friday, October 6, 2017

Notes at the End of Q1 for Adv. Comp.

I wanted to post these notes on the eve of your five day weekend -- I know it's like a mini-fall break! Here's what you should be working on, broken down by assessment ...


  • OBSERVATION ESSAY - review all of the links on the Slides show (esp. the rubric and the "optic" exercise) ... I've heard from Mrs. G in the Writing Center that there is some confusion about what a "visual rhetorical strategy is" - this is a strategy, from the "optic" system, to create meaning ... so something like "angle" or "framing" or "focus" is a "visual rhetorical strategy" ... just like use of "ethos" or use of "binaries" is a (written) rhetorical strategy ... [due Friday, Oct. 13 @ 11:59 PM]
  • RHETORICAL ANALYSIS - at this point you should have highlighted BOTH Article A and Article B AND written your thesis statement (at least)... you should have completed your pre-writing question set ... moving forward you should review the Ateya and the Kolb examples, as well as the relevant slides from the Slides presentation ... Also, if you want to get started writing, I will remind you that this handout from the Texas A&M Writing Center is an excellent description of the assignment at the college level ... [rough draft due in class Wed., Oct. 18]
  • EXPERTISE BOOK - As of this posting, you have 21 days to finish your "expertise book" ... flip to the last page, record the page #, and, simply, subtract that # from the # of the page you are currently on ... then divide by 21 - this # will be the # of pages you need to read daily to keep on pace ... ["expertise book" finished by Friday, Oct. 27]

Tuesday, September 26, 2017

Adv. Comp. - tips for your nightly homework until the end of the Q.

Thanks to the students in 8th hour for assisting with this list. Here's a .png copy of a Whiteboard photo; these are the four things you should be working on nightly until Oct. 13, 2017!


whiteboard notes from 9/26/17

Sunday, April 30, 2017

A Film Review for Journalism

To:   JOURNALISM STUDENTS
Re:   THE FILM REVIEW

For your final written assignment before the final exam you will compose a 2 - 3 pp. film review of an Academy Award winning film, released in the 21st c. Specific requirements and directions for a successful review will be distributed in class, and we will, of course, discuss the assignment at length before the due date. First, we will watch Errol Morris's masterpiece The Thin Blue Line and do some reading about his film. Copious details to follow ...

For now, I wanted to publish a list of the films you can choose from for your review. These are all 21st c. movies. You may choose one of these:
  • MOONLIGHT
  • SPOTLIGHT
  • BIRDMAN
  • 12 YEARS A SLAVE
  • ARGO
  • THE KING'S SPEECH
  • THE HURT LOCKER
  • SLUMDOG MILLIONAIRE
  • NO COUNTRY FOR OLD MEN
  • THE DEPARTED
  • CRASH
  • MILLION DOLLAR BABY
That's 12 total to choose from. If you want to select an older film, let's discuss it ...

Sunday, April 23, 2017

Final AoF Deadline Set

Here is a list of all the upcoming due dates for the required steps to complete the AoF essay. Failure to meet these "progress checks" will affect your final grade on the AoF essay.

1. Final Thesis - Tue., April 25
2. Seven Sentence Outline - Fri., April 28
3. All Sources (for Noodletools Notebook) - Tue., May 2
3. Draft Progress Check 1 (2.5 - 3.5 pp.) - Tue., May 2
4. Draft Progress Check 2 (at least 5 pp.) - Fri., May 5
5. Final Rough Draft Due (8 - 10 pp.) - Mon., May 8
6. Final Final Draft Due (8 - 10 pp.) - Fri., May 12 @ 11:59 PM

Please, see Dr. Jones if you have any questions ...

Wednesday, November 16, 2016

late Nov. - early Dec. due dates for Adv. Comp.

This is the second in a recent series of posts to help you "sort out" the many upcoming due dates in Adv. Comp. These assessments and other requirements are due between the final progress report deadline yesterday (11/15/16) and the end of the first full week in December ...

Monday, Nov. 21
Tuesday, Nov. 22
Monday, Nov. 28
Tuesday, Nov. 29
  • first few pages (2.5 - 3.5) of AoF essay in draft due
Thursday, Dec. 1
  • ALL sources due in Noodletools (16 notecards)
Friday, Dec. 2
Tuesday, Dec. 6
  • FULL version of AoF draft due for peer-critiquing
Sunday, Dec. 11

Tuesday, October 4, 2016

information regarding redos and retakes for all of my classes

updated - Oct. 17, 2017
Students,

Now that the end of the quarter is upon us, I want to share some information regarding redos and retakes for all of my classes and all of my sections.

As with my colleagues in the English Dept., I will (of course) honor the redo/retake policy as articulated by our Dept., which is included in all of my syllabi as well as available here.

Once you have reviewed the policy you will notice I expect you to notify me of your intent to redo or retake within two days of your score posting in Aspen. Just to be clear, I do not expect you to notify me within two days of the due date of the summative assessment but, rather, within two days of seeing your grade in the portal. Once you have notified me, you will have ten days to redo or retake and this timeframe includes any out-of-class redo/retake steps, including but not limited to meeting with me during a mutual free period.

Furthermore, I ask that you notify me of your intentions to redo/retake in writing via email. We will discuss the particulars of these emails in class, but I do expect you to include an appropriate subject line, your name, your class, and your section. Stay tuned for more details!

Monday, October 3, 2016

a busy end to a busy quarter in adv. comp.!

I want to share some clarifying details regarding the end of the quarter push for due dates and such. Here are the relevant dates (in bulleted form), and these dates are also accurately reflected in Aspen as well.


  • deadline to post college admissions essay to turnitin.com - Sunday, Oct. 16 @ 11:59 PM
  • deadline to post final draft of the Rhetorical Analysis Essay - Sunday, Oct. 23 @ 11:59 PM
  • additionally here are the dates "along the way" for the RA assignment
  • deadline to finish reading your "expertise book" - Fri., Nov. 11 @ end-of-class

Friday, January 15, 2016

Think of a Great URL for Your Blog

You will begin blogging soon, and, so, you need to think of a clever URL for your blog. We will use the Google blogging platform Blogger, and your URL will be _____ .blogspot.com. Like mine is drjonessclassnotes.blogspot.com.

So ... come up with something creative, something that express you for those first several letters of your own URL. I'll give you three examples.

First, one of America's most influential bloggers is a guy named Andrew Sullivan (you can google him), and he made a name for himself when he wrote for The Daily Beast. In fact, he became so influential that he started his own blog called The Dish. Now, I'm sure you get the reference, right? The Urban Dictionary defines "the dish" as "the scoop only bigger." Mr. Sullivan is a clever guy! (Unfortunately, The Dish ended continuous publication last June.)

Second, former Houston Chronicle reporter Jenny Lawson runs a blog she's dubbed The Bloggess. She's not a "goddess" she's the "bloggess" -- cha-ching! Oh, and she wins lots and lots of awards too for her scathing, sarcastic humor.

Third, two years ago I had a student named Melanie, and she named her blog "Peanut Butter and Melly." Her URL reflected this accordingly.

Hopefully, these examples illustrate and, well, inspire. Pick a strong name as it will "brand" your blog.

Friday, December 18, 2015

Spruce Up Your Blog!

As you are sprucing up your blogs for my final evaluation, make certain to review my feedback on your "formative" evals. 

Also, do not overlook the advice I gave in class. I've added a pic of these notes from the whiteboard in class. From this list - I am most impressed by those students who "write like they mean it!"

Wednesday, September 30, 2015

for Adv. Comp. students - steps in app. essay process

Today (9/30/15) in class you may remember this numbered list of the steps for your college app. essay, beginning with the first week of school ...


posted on the wall in C-117

Thursday, October 9, 2014

Sunday, October 5, 2014

Notes Relevant to the First Chapter of NARRATIVE OF THE LIFE ...

I will be posting here on my blog throughout (I hope!) our reading of The Narrative of the Life of Frederick Douglass.  I want you to keep up with these posts, as I think they will aid your understanding of the finer points of Douglass's text.

First of all, I want to "back-up" a bit and point out something about the reading you have been doing over the past ten days ...

You have been reading primary source documents in my class, at least insofar as you completed the "Representing Slavery Project."   The "document sets" you read from the Rochester Libraries are all primary sources -- that is they are original historical documents, written by people who experienced the events firsthand.  F. Douglass's Narrative is a primary source too.  By contrast, for instance, your history textbook is, mostly, a secondary source -- that is one that is written by experts discussing events after the fact.  When you study history, these distinctions are important to your full understanding of the readings.  I have a feeling that your U.S. history teachers will be talking more and more about this.

Just as an interesting example of the power of primary sources and the wealth of their scope, consider one of the questions we have before us: how did Southern politicians and "statesmen" (to use F. Douglass's word) justify slavery?  We have discussed this briefly in class (see again end note 15 in our edition of the Narrative), and we will continue to look at the question, yes.  But here's an interesting primary source (published in 1856) that presents justification for enslaving African Americans.  If you skim just the first few pages, you will recognize the Biblical argument, erroneously founded on Genesis.  Hard to believe, right?

Just to reiterate from our discussion on Friday, Southern slaveholders believed that, based on Genesis 9:18-27 , Caanan and all of the children of Caanan as well as (by extension for some reason) his nieces and nephews were rightfully enslaved.  We will continue to discuss this Southern "argument" for the next few days and weeks ...

I want to also remind you about our "learning target" for last Friday: "I can recognize a common inductive pattern (of  F. Douglass's)."  So, to remind you, Douglass begins his narrative (identically like all "slave narratives") with a short discussion of his origins, insofar as he knows them.  Soon, he shares some difficult revelations about himself -- namely that his mother was black but his father was white.  Then, he goes on to explain how he is the kind of child/person, one of mixed race heritage, who could bring down slavery.  Douglass clarifies that Southerns could not possibly continue support the enslavement of Caanan's progeny, especially since so many now are mixed with generations of white blood.  I tried to illustrate Douglass's "inductive pattern" with a diagram on the white board. Keep in mind that "inductive" means to reason from the specific to the general -- that is from something small to something very large.  (In fairness, yes, inductive reasoning can also be deeply flawed, especially in the case of stereotyping.)

Wednesday, March 19, 2014

outling is a reading skill too!

Advanced Composers,

Today in class seemed to confuse a few of you, so I wanted to provide a bit of clarification in this blog post.  First of all, the homework to complete tonight is a reading task not a writing one.  You are to outline your "expertise book" author's "opening matter" -- that is the Introduction, Preface, Preamble, or Forward.

This outline is the "skeleton" of the author's argument, and our various authors will include these bits of "opening matter" in an effort to lay out the much, much longer work's cogent features and arguments.  In essence, the "opening matter" in book-form non-fiction is a "road map" for the rest of the text, and, reading the "opening matter" along with the Table of Contents will provide a complete picture of the depth of the longer work's full revelations and insights.

I've found a relevant post from Salisbury University (in Maryland), and I will re-post the best bit here:


"The key to both outlining and summarizing is being able to distinguish between the main ideas and the supporting ideas and examples. The main ideas form the backbone, the strand that holds the various parts and pieces of the text together. Outlining the main ideas helps you to discover this structure ..."

So, you are outlining the main points (essentially listing the main points in an organized, tiered fashion).  Your own outline will look nothing (really) like mine, as no one of you is reading To End All Wars.  (I also sent you via email a handwritten, .pdf copy of the Google Doc that is linked in the previous sentence.)

Wednesday, March 12, 2014

rhetorical analysis resources -- all in one place!

Advanced Composers,

I want to remind you of all of the resources at your disposal for writing the Rhetorical Analysis.  I would review them in this order:


Also, I have done a bit of internet searching on your behalf, and I have three good college writing center pages to share.  (The college writing center information is particularly rich in general and the various approaches to writing this type of assignment are often pointed and highly relevant.)

Try these three:

Thursday, February 13, 2014

you are blogging now!

Students,

Yesterday and today in class you will be working on your new blog -- you are an author now! I put together this short presentation to assist you in setting up your account properly and getting started with a few initial edits.  Write about anything (and the assignments I will give you). Most of all - have fun!

Tuesday, October 15, 2013

Adv. Comp: Background on Blogging for Purposes of Writing Your Own Posts Part 2

So ... it is easy (to some extent) then to see just how influential and important the weblog or "blog" is in our contemporary internet-based, media culture.  But, who are some influential bloggers and/or influential blogs?  I have my own opinions, and I would like you to form some of your own too ...

Without a doubt Andrew Sullivan (The Dish) is one of the country's most influential bloggers, and, in fact, Harvard Magazine named him the "world's most influential blogger."  Sullivan, born in the UK but now living in the US is a devout Catholic, despite the fact that he is openly gay.  Sullivan has done a great deal to advance awareness of issues around sexual identity even though his political stances are conservative of a libertarian-cum-republican order.  He is a blogger to know.

Nicholas Carr and Mark Blumenthal are two additional bloggers to know from the political-cultural commentary world.  Carr, who blogs at Rough Type (great name btw!), has recently raised significant questions around our insatiable internet dependence, most notably in an excellent article for The Atlantic Monthly, entitled "Is Google Making Us Stupid?"  Subsequent to his article, Carr wrote a book regarding the same topic.

Other important bloggers and/or blogs include Jenny Lawson, a former Houston Chronicle reporter who blogs as "The Bloggess" (great handle, huh?), scienceisbeauty (which may single-handedly prove not all of tumblr is total trash), and James Fallows, a nationally renowned correspondent for The Atlantic Monthly.

Some important multi-author-blogs or MABs include Talking Points Memo (TPI), the Ted Blog, and The Huffington Post.

Monday, October 14, 2013

Adv. Comp: Trimming Your Memory Narrative into an App Essay

Now that we are post-Columbus Day, it is time to form that MN into a college app. essay (for those of you who need one).  First, please complete this survey, so I know who needs to do what -- this will help me help you!

Then, if you need assistance with trimming, follow this link to a presentation I've created to assist you.  Work through these slides, and you should be able to edit down and polish to an acceptable app. essay!

Keep in mind that this process is "on your own time" as we are moving to new challenges in class ... 

Wednesday, October 9, 2013

Adv. Comp.: Background on Blogging for Purposes of Writing Your Own Posts Part 1

During the course of the semester, I will ask you to add entries to your "Research Blog" -- the first entry regarding your Editorial is forthcoming soon.  In order to write quality entries, I find it appropriate to know something about the history of blogging and understand who (or maybe what) is influential in the "blogosphere." 

The term blog was coined in 1997 by internet phenom and self-made, Chicago writer Jorn Barger who frequently "logged the web" or "web-logged" in his early uber-blog "Robot Wisdom." (Later, the longer iteration, "web-log" was simply shortened to "blog.")  


Barger named the new writing style, but its first practitioner (of repute) was another Chicago native Justin Hall. Hall started an online diary. "Justine's Links from the Underground" in 1994 while attending Swarthmore College.  Hall still actively blogs (and how cool is it that his site url is, simply, links.net?).


Hall, along with others, were simply prolific, "web-site-updaters" during a time when web-authoring required some, at least, rudimentary knowledge of coding and the use of FTP, and, during the period of internet development between 1994 and 1999 Hall and his compatriots were more or less writing, rewriting, and overwriting HTML files.  Think of this process as writing, rewriting, and overwriting a Word doc., say, that you send via email to the same people over and over again each week.


However, in the late 1990s, improvements to software (or more aptly internet browser functionality) coupled with improvements in the stability of the internet, led to actual "posting" or "logging" capabilities, and the era of the ubiquitous WYSIWYG was born.  One of the earliest iterations of this newer technology, launched in 1999, was blogger.com from Pyra labs, and, in an endorsement of the future-leaning of blogging itself, internet colossus Google purchased blogger.com a mere four years later in 2003.


From 1999/2000 until about 2009, or roughly the first ten years of broader appeal and increasing use, blogging was generally an individual writing activity.  However, now, most influential bloggers are part of "multi-author blogs" (MAB) like "The Huffington Post," "Mental Floss," "Talking Points Memo," and "Gawker."  Also, most major, traditional newspapers have bloggers or use blogging as part of their general news reporting; David Pogue, a technology writer for The New York Times, is an excellent example of a traditional newspaper columnist who has adapted to the only-slightly-different-pose of a blogger. 


Many have commented on the increasingly useless game of labeling web-based writing as either "journalism" or merely "blogging."  The prolific and highly influential Andrew Sullivan, formerly of the MAB "The Daily Beast" has made a notable career eschewing traditional print forms altogether.

Thursday, September 26, 2013

Eng. 3: Map Assignment Clarifications

Students,

I have received some email, and I have chatted with a few of you in the hallways over the last day or so.  So, I want to clarify a few points regarding the HF "map assignment.

For all of the ACTUAL towns (the places on the front side of the handout), you should type a short description that includes the town's relevance to HF for Hannibal, Florida, and Cairo.  When describing the other cities, you do not need to make an overt reference to HF

Take a look at my example entry as a starting point but find the best info. for your description in our school databases (try "US History in Context" and/or the "Literature Resource Center" and/or "Encyclopedia Britannica").  Once you have skimmed through the database resources, you may refer to Wikipedia.

For the fictional places, underlined on the back side of the handout, do your best, using the zooming power of Google Maps, to "pin" the location.  I expect a short description of the relevance of Jackson's Island to HF, but -- at this point -- you need only "pin" the other spots.  You will add descriptions to these later as you encounter each in the text.

Finally, one important goal is to demonstrate your "creativity" with this small project.  What photos might you add?  What is the best description, given your research, you might write?  My intention with your investigations is to have you go beyond the typical "first hits" in Google.